please I will mark brainliest, I need help with my introduction paragraph can u like correct me and add something in my introduction paragraph especially my hook

Answer:
Can you imagine being unable to drink or wash in clean water? Numerous people around the world don't have clean water to drink or to bathe in! Many citizens in the rural part of China don't have access to clean water at all! From (put your reason you will talk about) to (put your 2nd reason you will talk about), (put your reason for this essay like {people in particular parts of china don't have any clean water}this part of this sentence is probably wrong so do your own sentence for this or look it up online).